Jennafina

Spacing! Give your dialogue some room! It can't breath and it's suffocating. We must resuscitate it! 0_o Kidding. :D Basically, I mean please format your work, it'll be easier to ...

That would be cool! Do you think you could make me an avatar with Fai? Here's the picture. I don't think it's exactly 100x100 but it's close. I don't care ...

Shadow, you can edit your own posts if you want to add something so you don't have to double post. :) It's the edit button on the upper right. I ...

I love your title, even before I read the poem. The last stanza doesn't seem to fit, because up until then your stanzas had a different format. Your last stanza ...

Sounds good to me! I edited my post from earlier today. Grif, if anything doesn't work, just let me know. :)

I'm with Clau that this would make a great poem. Also, it makes a great blurb if you'd be interested in making a longer story. It seems like something that ...

Becky Stillman "I'm going to the Elven camp, to see what's happening." "But sir, you said you'd teach me somthin' once I was done with this! How long will you ...

I'm with Crysi. I love getting private messages. It's always fun to meet new people. About the chatroom thing, I don't know. It's a good way to find out what ...

I like her! She looks kind of like a CLAMP character. She's much too short, though, and her plain dress looks weird with her highly detailed face, hair and staff. ...

*beams up TT* Welcome to YWS, ensign! I'm a Star Trek fan too, that and almost all sci-fi. My favorite is Voyager but I've seen pretty much all the episodes ...

Becky gritted her teeth and forced herself to look back at the dragon. "Yes, sir." She could tell she was making all sorts of terrified faces; she'd never been able ...

You've all got glasses! 8_8 *tries to make an emoticon with glasses* Evil Rob is scary. I have no comment about the 'stache deal. Cool pictures. :)

I think I'd like this better if you did the same cool format thing without dividing up words on seperate lines. It's really distracting, and messes up the flow because ...

I'd give it to Ife. - Sensuret. If everyone in the world was going to die, except for you and one other person, who would you pick? Who would pick ...

I think this would make a wonderful short story! As a poem, though, I think it's a bit too long, and didn't really hold my attention. I'd like it more ...