Jennafina

Hello YoundDruid and Tynan! I'm Jenna. Welcome to YWS! I like Tamora Pierce, Phillip Pullman and Eoin Colfer. Your avatar is pretty. What's it from? Mine is Fai from Tsubasa. ...

“Well there,” she heard his heckling laugh, “guess we got a little ahead of ourselves there?” This sounds kind of weird. He says there twice. He’s going to hate me. ...

I thought the man was Jonathon, not Kyle, because of the bleeding arm. He escaped her punishment because Sarah tortured Kyle, not him. This is awesome, though. I love how ...

“Jonathon.” Kyle said. There should be a comma instead of a period after Jonathon. No other complaints, though. This part was especially good. -Jenna

Hello! I've been reading these, and until now, I haven't had a critique. “Stop it, Kyle! You can’t keep manipulating me as you please!” This sounds kind of fake. That's ...

Becky watched Adrian storm over to Seraph then knelt down by the body he had abandoned. She wondered who had killed it. Someone with a sword. Becky poked vaguely at ...

Thanks. :) *is fixing for next draft*

Did you make all of this yourself? I really like the background, and the way the entire think is sort of soft. I don't think the dragon would be able ...

Hi Micerz! Welcome to YWS! I'm Jenna. I've never been to Ireland. Have you lived there always? What should we call you?

Bye! Have a good time. I'll miss you. :)

"Looks like the group is in trouble! Stay close to me." Alden's shriek made Becky's blood curdle. He bounded forward. She was forcing her horse into a gallop when behind ...

Thanks! :) Could you please tell me what about the preportions is off? I know something is, but I can't tell. Is her head too small?

I thought it was going to be questions about YWS. Hehe, I sucked, though. I haven't heard of most of the poeple mentioned.

I was just talking with Sieg andn Grif in the chatroom, and here's some of what discussed. What do you think? Valin could have some trouble getting on the throne. ...

Brad and Snoinky! :D Ani and DQ. I'm not exactly sure why, but it seems like it would work. Emma and Sponson L. Could somebody match me up? Lol, it's ...