Jennafina

Hey Alainna. :) I'm Jenna. Welcome to YWS! I've read some of the Phillip Pullman books, but not The Butterfly Tattoo. I loved the His Dark Materials trilogy, and the ...

Posting Checklist Here are my suggestions on what to do before you post something in the Literary Forums. 1. Have you critiqued at least two things by other people? That's ...

They said I needed to work on my stage presence, it was to blah. To lacking of the excitement that was so very necessary for any performer to be successful. ...

Interesting title. :) It was salad for CHRIST’S SAKE! SALAD!!!!!!!!! You only have to use one exclamation point. Also, italics are less distracting than caps. Please double space your dialogue. ...

Ramwick was too be married, decided by his guardians. 'To' instead of 'too'. The mood was awkward, this was the first Karz had said about the subject with Ramwick, he ...

They're so cute! ^_^ Hahaha. Boing, boing, boing... *adds kangaroo sound effects*

Wow. I need to work on my history. 0_0

Valin jerked the knife out of the scull. "Can I light a candle or somethin'?" Becky asked. "Here," Henry said, handing her some flint. The little flame grew, and flickered. ...

I'm going for 2000 by June 30. That will be 1000 a year. :D Maybe you've just been posting a lot, Nate?

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Can I call you Para-chan? ^_^ Cool username. I liked Fruits Basket until about book ten. I've never played the Final Fantasy games but the movies ...

A monkey would make the most sense, but I think a dragon is cooler.

You said Fand instead of Finn! ^_^ I like it though.

Lucky- BBcode doesn't work in the biography section. Just plain text. :)

You're a newb, not a n00b. Being a n00b means you're annoying. A newb is a newbie. Anyway, I like all of these, especially the second and third. They're so ...

I think you should make your paragraphs a little shorter. It'll be easier to read if it's less together. Not everything needs a description. I'd rather see some more action. ...