Jennafina

Sounds a little snobby, lol. Kind of like she's perfect and kind and clever, but can be a little bratty about it. Also sounds teenage. Laura

*Eats Cookie* I mean- er... Welcome to YWS! I hope you like the site. I sure do. :mrgreen: I'll look for your stories. That's cool that you finished them. See ...

Aww, sorry about the writer's block, that's no fun. Good luck getting rid of it! You can do it. ^_^ Moved to Writer's Corner. -Jenna

Hi Mike! I'm Jenna. Welcome to YWS! I like fantasy/sci-fi, sometimes they're good mixed, too. How long have you been writing? That's cool about the cliché thing. Stories that take ...

Hello. Please copy and paste your story here instead of having it as an attachment. You'll get more reviews if you do. Also, there's a forum rule that says you ...

Hello! Please, please format this. Add more paragraphs, and double space them. If you have any dialogue give that a separate line too. Right now, it's pretty much impossible for ...

Hello! Please format your work! It makes it so much easier to read. :) It's easy to lose your place when all the text is scrunched together, instead of double ...

Hey Jen, I'm Jenna. ^_^ Welcome to YWS! I also love Teddy Grahms. My favorite kind are the ones with chocolate chips in them. Randomness is fun too. Here, there's ...

Hello! I'm Jenna. That's cool about meeting the Nancy Drew author. I haven't read Nancy Drew, but I almost got a chance to meet Tamora Pierce. I hadn't read her ...

How about a catagory I know at least a little about about? :D *thinks* ...Um. Manga? Cats? Star Trek?

*wants to keep the piggies* They're so cute! Can piggies be our mascot?

I don't really like the word sneered on the man's last sentence. Up until then he's been polite and grave. The word sneered seems to imply a smirk, or a ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS, Sumi! ^_^ I'm Jenna. I'm also an anime/manga geek, and I'm taking Japanese. Very cool. :D I haven't read your story yet, but I will, I ...

Edited! I added the thing about periods, and tried to make the dialogue line more specific. Is it any better? Clau>> About the stickyness, I'd be flattered. :)

Please format your story! It would be easier to read if the paragraphs were double spaced. I lost my place a lot in the middle paragraph. he simply floated through ...