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Jennafina

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Sounds of the Santoor (A Tale of Hundred strings)

    Hey, Young gun! Thanks for the link to this. You've chosen an interesting format for this. At first it seemed a little strange, but the more I read the more ...

    Dec 10, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If I Were the Wind...

    Hello, Mr. Knightley, I'm Jenna and I will be your reviewer for today. :) The first thing I think you should do is completely get rid of the last line, ...

    Dec 8, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]

    7/10, because it makes me think of the Artemis Fowl books.

    Dec 7, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Guess Who! (PG?)

    Lily, thank you so much for coming back and looking again. I'm glad you think they're better. Kitty Darling, you're right about everything. I will definitely make the changes, and ...

    Dec 6, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Guess Who! (PG?)

    Thank you so much! I made some changes and posted the redone drawings. -#1's forehead has more shading. -#2 has highlights, and her eyes are redrawn. -Dexter's eyes are redone ...

    Dec 3, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Guess Who! (PG?)

    The last one is indeed Dashing Dexter, and I'm very flattered that you were able to tell (I sent you 100 points.) I don't think it's camera angle that makes ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Lonely?

    This is very strange, my friend. That's not a bad thing: it's kind of like your avatar. I like your style, and what the girl is wearing. Could you post ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Information Desk Archive Re: Big changes to topics

    Nate, it looks wonderful around here. :)

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Guess Who! (PG?)

    PG for possible creepiness to those who don't like needles. Lately I've been working on portraits and watching way too much television, and it looks like my pastimes have combined! ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Get Off My Wall

    Amber, my friend, don't be sorry! I would be very happy to review anything you write. Ever. :) I like your poem a lot, it made me smile. In the ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Prologue - The Stray Flame (18+ for language)

    Your story had me interested from the first sentence. I like what she says about beautiful boys, and when he sits down it's almost sexual? I'm not sure if that's ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Mid Fall's Charm

    Hello! Thanks for the link to this. The first one is a bit too blurry for my taste-- it's kind of like I'm wearing the wrong strength glasses. If you ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Leaves (drawing)

    These are very beautiful. I love how they're almost abstract. The soft colors in the first one look so good together, and I like your bold, confident lines. The space ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Halt Assassin! (meh artwork ^_^)

    Dear Maki-Chan, Your artwork is beautiful. Each picture has so much character and energy, they seem truly alive. They make me wonder what the story is behind them, especially the ...

    Dec 2, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Saturday Nite

    Hey, I'm Jenna. The first line grabbed me. Before I read another word, I was hooked. Reading onward, though, I'm pretty disappointed that you made it rhyme. For lack of ...

    Sep 17, 2009


You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
— Rod Serling