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Re: Sounds of the Santoor (A Tale of Hundred strings)
Hey, Young gun! Thanks for the link to this. You've chosen an interesting format for this. At first it seemed a little strange, but the more I read the more ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: If I Were the Wind...
Hello, Mr. Knightley, I'm Jenna and I will be your reviewer for today. :) The first thing I think you should do is completely get rid of the last line, ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
7/10, because it makes me think of the Artemis Fowl books.
Dec 7, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
Lily, thank you so much for coming back and looking again. I'm glad you think they're better. Kitty Darling, you're right about everything. I will definitely make the changes, and ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
Thank you so much! I made some changes and posted the redone drawings. -#1's forehead has more shading. -#2 has highlights, and her eyes are redrawn. -Dexter's eyes are redone ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
The last one is indeed Dashing Dexter, and I'm very flattered that you were able to tell (I sent you 100 points.) I don't think it's camera angle that makes ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Lonely?
This is very strange, my friend. That's not a bad thing: it's kind of like your avatar. I like your style, and what the girl is wearing. Could you post ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Big changes to topics
Nate, it looks wonderful around here. :)
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
PG for possible creepiness to those who don't like needles. Lately I've been working on portraits and watching way too much television, and it looks like my pastimes have combined! ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Get Off My Wall
Amber, my friend, don't be sorry! I would be very happy to review anything you write. Ever. :) I like your poem a lot, it made me smile. In the ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Prologue - The Stray Flame (18+ for language)
Your story had me interested from the first sentence. I like what she says about beautiful boys, and when he sits down it's almost sexual? I'm not sure if that's ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Mid Fall's Charm
Hello! Thanks for the link to this. The first one is a bit too blurry for my taste-- it's kind of like I'm wearing the wrong strength glasses. If you ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Leaves (drawing)
These are very beautiful. I love how they're almost abstract. The soft colors in the first one look so good together, and I like your bold, confident lines. The space ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Halt Assassin! (meh artwork ^_^)
Dear Maki-Chan, Your artwork is beautiful. Each picture has so much character and energy, they seem truly alive. They make me wonder what the story is behind them, especially the ...
Dec 2, 2009 -
Re: Saturday Nite
Hey, I'm Jenna. The first line grabbed me. Before I read another word, I was hooked. Reading onward, though, I'm pretty disappointed that you made it rhyme. For lack of ...
Sep 17, 2009
