Jennafina

This looks like poetry to me! Why's it in Other? If it's Other Poetry, there's a section for that.

“Where is he?” they whispered in his ear. I don't like the 'they'. It makes it seem like they're saying it at the same time. “Kyle is in…Antarctica?” one of ...

Hey Lauren! I'm Jenna. There's a YWS chatroom you might like. You should check it out! Welcome to YWS by the way. What type of stuff do you write? I ...

Why are there numbers at the end of every line? I can't think what they add. Anyway, this seemed more like flash fiction than poetry to me. If you take ...

Down to business earth-justice lawyer. She's pretty good at what she does, and believes in her cause. Pretty in an ignorable way, brunette with dark eyes and ruddy skin. May ...

*prints* Thanks for writing this, Jack! That's a really great article. Now I need to figure out a way to include a battle scene in my story. Do you think ...

Granted, but you've committed yourself to something really boring and now you're stuck with it. I wish I had something really yummy to eat for dinner.

In my opinion, I believe These mean essentially the same thing. You don't need both. By today’s standards, they are clothed, fed, and provided accommodation by the parents until they ...

It looks like a rocket! On a plate. Jk. :) I like the second picture, with all the windows. It's cool how they aren't all in a line. The randomness ...

Hello! Have a belated welcome to YWS. ;) I'm Jenna. Gah. I hate homework. That's part of the reason I homeschool, lol. That's cool about your stories. ^_^ What type ...

A shy French girl, who likes to wear brown dresses. She could be really pretty if she smiled more. Abraham

*isn't scared away* Hey Spica! That's a pretty name, by the way. Is it yours in real life? Fantasy's my favorite genre too. I like it best combined with sci-fi. ...

Hey TF. :D I'm Jenna. Welcome to YWS! Good luck on the fast. :) I haven't read anything by Stephen King, but I see his books around a lot and ...

I like this a lot! It seems like every word counts towards the story, and nothing's extra. Your descriptions are just right, not too fluffy but enough to give me ...

Wouldn't that be L'ila then? A girl, young. She might have pigtails. She would act happy and clueless, but understand more than people think. She also really likes sweets. :D ...