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Re: A random fact about yourself
I wear eight earrings, and they always have to match my clothes. :)
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: The Background
Hello, Emoticon! Thanks for posting your lyrics. Which instrument do you play? I noticed a few punctuation errors in your song. Writing lyrics is like writing poetry, format wise-- it's ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Leather Shoes
Hey, Kamas! Thanks for the link to this. All of these art inspired poems are awesome. The format seemed a bit bunched up, and crowded. I think it could be ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: On hardwood floors.
Traditionally, words in the title of a poem are capitalized, so it would be "On Hardwood Floors." I like the title a lot, by the way. Something else I really ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
7/10. She's so pretty, and I like her expression. I like avatars best when they're a 100x100 square, though.
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Feelings on Atheism
I'm an atheist, and I wish I weren't. I've tried to be religious, and read a lot of the materials-- the Bible, the book of Mormon, stories from the Torah, ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Pudin's Image Shack
Your photographs are well done. Especially in the first one, I like the way you've adjusted the focus. The background is really nice, colorful but not at all distracting. Something ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Kama's Photography Exhibition - [Updated Jan 16, 2010]
Hey, Kamas. :) Thanks for the link to this, these are lovely! Luna I don't really like this one. It's a bit blurry around the nose. That would be okay ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: Amy's Mish-Mash. (Updated 14/01/10)
Hey, Aqua. Thanks for the link! Danger, mines! That's an awesome sign, where did you find it? Even with this really incredible subject matter, it seems a bit more like ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: impression #2: les pĂȘches (peaches)
I love how you wrote a story about a famous painting. That's a really cool idea. Normally I'd tell you to punctuate it, but I like it without capitalization. It ...
Dec 15, 2009 -
Re: Critiques (art especially!)
Looking for a review? I'm best at critiquing art, particularly drawings, because that's what I do the most of. However, I'd be happy to give my inexpert opinion on anything. ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: part 2
Quick note-- it's a YWS rule that for every piece of writing you post, you should review three or so things by other people. This will help with your own ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: Blood
Hey, Fantasyfreak. I've read a lot of poems very much like this, with the theme of "I'm alone, nobody cares, so I hurt myself." It's not a bad theme in ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Utopia
Hey, Man on the Side. It's great that you're posting your work! There is a rule though that for each piece of art or writing you post, you should review ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: "Never Be Alone" part one
Hello! I think the format you've got is correct for an all dialogue piece. As I was saying.. oh, whatever, you made me forget. Should be, "As I was saying... ...
Dec 10, 2009
