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Thanks, Mad and Alainna! ^_^ The longer lines don't symbolize anything. I just ended each line where I thought it sounded best. I'll try to shorten them if it's distracting. ...

Granted. You can see the future, but you can't change it, so it's really depressing. I wish It were summer already.

It sounds like a historical fiction about a circus. Even though I've never heard it before, the title sounds a little cliché. If I saw it on a shelf, I'd ...

Full Name: Becky Stillman Gender: Female Age: 21 Race: Human Eye Color: Brown Height: 5'6" average build. Occupation: none yet. History: Sedegely survivor. She ran away and hid at the ...

Night is sinking, fluttering to earth as black paper. August looms like a shadow, a ledge that will inevitably interrupt my fall. My guilt is definite. Prophecies aren't blotchy ink ...

That's amazin'! Congrats, Writersdomain! ^_^

Granted, but you drop all of it in a puddle and have to start over fresh. I wish I weren't so tired.

I wonder if people would act like Fred if they didn't have to take time to type. He's pretty cool, but can be a little annoying. Eep! I'm treating him ...

5/10. Pretty, but plain.

There should be a spoiler warning on this, if we're talking about who dies. :D I know what you're talking about, though. Maybe authors make the character that's going to ...

Hello! I've got some serious problems finishing things too. Have you tried short stories? They're easier to finish than novels. I think there are articles about this in the writing ...

Um... Creepy. >_< Jk. It's pretty cool. And wherever you go, his eyes follow you.

Hey Ethan! I like manga too, reading and drawing. Have a favorite? There's a manga/anime usegroup you could join if you're interested in discussing it on YWS. I hope you ...

He was never at rest, filled with a restless, frenetic energy that saw him propelled all about his small shop. The word rest is in here twice. "Such individuals are ...

Doom was imminent. Up 'till this, there's been lots of showing and no telling, which is great. This is melodramatic and unnecessary. Haha, that sounds really mean. XD It was ...