Jennafina

6/10. I can't tell what they are, but they're kind of pretty. It's a little boring, though.

7/10. His eyebrows... they're alive...

8/10. Very funny, but I don't know who Dave Anez is so I don't really get it.

When Harris's men had captured her, something had happened. Becky tried to remember the moment, but couldn't. She tried again, from an earlier time. Adrian had been there. They were ...

Good luck! :D Shut it down permanently, or just for a while?

Lucky kid... I wish my parents were publishers. :) Anyway, I don't think his books are horrible (actually, I only read Eragon so I guess I can't use the plural ...

Becky had the ceiling memorized. There was one thin crack in the cement that ran from corner to corner. Near the opposite wall was a tiny hold from which greenish ...

The girl is really cool looking; kind of vampire-y. The four squares are annoying, though. 8/10

"Mind games." *smirk* -Adam Where would you rather be right now?

Hello! Your image links aren't working, but I found your devart page so I can comment. :) Cooro- Beautiful wings and hair. It looks really touchable. His face and tunic ...

I liked your story a lot! I've got a few comments, though. Your sentence structure is hardly varied. The *blank* did *blank* format is overused. There isn't any dialogue, or ...

Hey Zak, welcome to YWS! We have the same influences. :D Your story sounds really cool. I'd love to see some. I'm not sure where you'd post it, though. I ...

I didn't actually read the glossary, but it seems like Grif and Liz already critiqued it. :D If only you could see the way I let out a small grin ...

Granted, but then there's a power outage so you can't use it. I wish my marketing class were more interesting.

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