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Re: Title Feedback
It sounds like either fantasy or historical fiction to me, and is too short to hold my attention. Also, I'd be afraid to say it out loud for fear of ...
May 12, 2007 -
Re: Yelp
Cute, cute. The title fits. Nat should be spelled gnat, if you're talking about the insect. :) I like this, it is kiddish, but also fun. I think you could ...
May 12, 2007 -
Re: One Billion Bulbs Campaign
I signed up! I love curly light bulbs, especially how they don't get very hot so you can put things near them and not have to worry about starting a ...
May 12, 2007 -
Re: Murder Trials...
Do you have any specific questions about them? Have you tried reading the newspaper? A lot of the time it's got quite a few articles about trials a day.
May 11, 2007 -
Re: Arch Angels
Hey baka-arisa! Please don't post your stories more than once. :) If it's different, at least change the title or say edited. I deleted the other one, but saved the ...
May 10, 2007 -
Re: The Greatest Treasure
Becky's hand had swollen to almost twice the normal size. She had tried to set the bone, but she knew next to nothing about advanced first aid. The pain at ...
May 10, 2007 -
Re: How Often Do You Critique?
I try for once or twice a day, but that doesn't always happen.
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Worst Ending line EVER!
I woke up in the psych ward. (I actually used that one in sixth grade. 0_0)
May 9, 2007 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish
Granted, but it's done really hastily and poorly. I wish I had a few more hours in this day.
May 9, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
10/10. It reminds me of the pirates movies, but even if that's not what it's from, it's very cool.
May 8, 2007 -
Re: Character Profiles
I think the problem with these is that your characters are designed too hastily, instead of slowly developing as you write. They're fun to fill out, but I think they ...
May 8, 2007 -
Re: Just In Time
I walked into the kitchen just in time to her him say I think you mean hear him say. Becaue he knew that it would make me cry and he ...
May 8, 2007 -
Re: Let's try this again!
Yeah, I was telling Clau how weird it was to discover someone from the same place on a website that's not gigantic. :D Hi again!
May 8, 2007 -
Re: GT Plot Discussion
I think that Ria having the sword would be a very mighty coinky-dink. If it is possible to have her sword picked up by someone else, it would be much ...
May 6, 2007 -
Re: GT Plot Discussion
I don't see why the group would drag along Alana without a better reason. Some members obviously don't have a problem with harming the semi-innocent, like the drunks. Maybe they ...
May 6, 2007
