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Hippy (hippie?) Girl Great pose! :D She's very alive looking. I love her face and hair. Her eyes would be prettier if they had a pupil, though. Her hands seem ...

Hehe, why is it Incan? I like the tie and ears. Nice touches. ;)

Here's another pretty one.

Standing at the alter were four figures, three men and one female. This sounds awkward. You could say either "three men and one woman" or "three males and one female," ...

W00t! ^_^ *throws confetti*

Bye, Nate! Have a great trip. :D

Kevin got out of the car, and the rest of the little crowed followed him. He gestured at his apartment building. Mev stared at him. "So, we're all going to ...

Hey, Jane! I am also Jane. xD You can call me Jenna, though, so it doesn't get confusing. Welcome to YWS! What do you write? How long have you been ...

I read somewhere that lefties are more creative and better at painting, so I spent my entire eighth grade trying to be left handed. xD Haha... I should post some ...

Oops! Sorry, Crysi. *fixed*

The next thing Becky remembered seeing was the guard's body in pieces at her feet. So she had killed him. Good. Becky turned around, just in time to see another ...

Why shouldn't we ask you?

8/10. It made me smile. :) But why is cat capitalized?

"I said, why is there blood on your hands?" The girl repeated her question. Mev was watching the gun. Her hands were shaking, and her finger was on the trigger. ...

This was a little too long to hold my interest. I think rhyming poems, unless they're epic and tell a story like The Raven, should be short and sweet. I ...