Jennafina

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Welcome back! ^_^

Yes, this is the right place. :) This is a very pretty picture! Proportion wise, there are some things that could be fixed which I'll talk about later, but in ...

xD I love it, Clau. It has the sing-songy feel of a nursery rhyme, only more morbid. I'm afraid to read it again- it's not something I want to have ...

Congrats! *parties* The next thing you should try for is five stars. ;)

Mev heaved a suitcase into the back of the Bronco. "Dude, these weigh a ton. What'd you put in them?" "Just some supplies." Kevin's answer was vague, which made Mev ...

How do you feel about the concept of "Gay Pride"? I'm fine with it. People should be proud to be who they are. It's certainly better than being ashamed. If ...

w00t! You'll get more stars quickly if you review more.

"Becky, untie the horses. We're not taking the wagons into the cave." Becky eyed the animals distrustfully. They were eager to get moving again, stamping their feet and whinnying, and ...

Happy birthday! Again. :D

Set in present time. Show, don't tell! You say carpet a lot in the first paragraph. Maybe you could vary it up? He stepped closer, his cerulean eyes tinted with ...

It's so cute! I really like the cloth, the shading is wonderful. His eyes are so realistic, they look wet and shiny. The fire or smoke on its hands is ...

(OOC: I hope this doesn't interfere with your post, Sab!) Something had fallen from the sky. For a split second, Becky thought that Kira had somehow got out of the ...

Ooh! It's scary! xD I like Waffle's idea of moving the lines closer to the eyes. Also, I think you should thicken the lines so they stand out better. I ...

I think if you're going to mark in a book, it had better be yours. I like writing in my books, though it's a little distracting the next time you ...