Jennafina

Hey, Conrad! Thanks for the critique, and I'm really glad you like it. I'll see what I can do about when they first meet to make it less confusing! JP, ...

Hey, Gothic Butterfly. I'm Jenna, and I will be your reviewer for today. I read chapter six, enjoyed it but didn't know exactly what was going on, and so I ...

These are beauties! The shading, especially on their shirts is really well done. You've captured the folds, wrinkles and dimension of the fabric really nicely. The shine of their hair ...

Me please! I would love a review. I'd be happy to return the favor as well, if you've got something you'd like me to critique for you. I'm just really ...

Hey, Deme my darling. :) If you get time, could you review my short Other Fiction story Dancers in the Darkness? I could use some no nonsense feedback. Anything you ...

First, there are some very important grammar changes that you should make to make this poem readable. Change all the u's to you, capitalize the I's, put an apostrophe in ...

I was with you until a few months ago. It's under Writing Resources>>Knowledge Base/The Writer's Corner. Then scroll down, you'll find it.

RSVP I will be at the theater for a lot of that day, but I'm setting a personal goal of four decently sized reviews. That's a lot for me. :D

I'm not exactly sure what you were going for with this, so I'm also not sure if you achieved it. I see you've posted it in the fiction sections though... ...

Glitter Hey, JP. Thank you so much for your critique on my story. I thought I'd return the favor. :) “You first.” She said coyly.  "You first," she said, coyly. ...

Tara awoke to the sound of hooves on the grassy ground; a sound that she'd been hearing a lot of lately but still had not gotten used to. She stood ...

This is so beautiful. The detail work is amazing-- your lines are so sharp and crisp. I love the idea of the piece as well; the kids are so full ...

Tara awoke to the sound of hooves on the grassy ground; a sound that she'd been hearing a lot of lately but still had not gotten used to. She stood ...

Note: I am so disgustingly out of practice, it's been months since I've written anything longer than a page. Tear this to shreds for me-- be brutally honest. Dancers in ...

Happy birthday, beautiful. :)