Jennafina

I think your poll needs another option.. Confuseing.. I dont understand! :( sorry, im stupid..

:p Suposedly the romans said that mars was the god of war of somthing.. I dont know where I learned that though so it might be just one of those ...

This made me think about dying. Now Im all paranoid.. :p My favorite part is this In my naive bubble, I bet between cancer and old age. Ironic... I never ...

Wow, I really really like this! Id like to print it and hang it on my wall. I love how in only a few lines you gave each of the ...

Mars is bright replaced with futile flight.. Better?

I just edited. I did my best to replace any punctuation errors.. Tell me if theres a big obvious one I missed...

Im going to do another edit...

A while ago I made this enormous spreadsheet of names I like, and words like ocean or Cavern that could be names. They are sorted alphabetacly, and when I get ...

Your story was short, rense, gripping and very confuseing. It sounds a little bit like he end of a story, more than the whole thing. Perhaps you could make a ...

Thats funny! Whos cheeko?

I dont get it.. Xp

Your story really pulled me in from the start. I really liked the atmosphere, it was fast paced, and tence, and kept me reading. Is there going to be more ...

Wow, your writeing is really, really amazeing. I love your writeing style. Especially this We all think of these spectacular ways to die, to end our time. In the end ...

Oh, hello again, pricelesslove! Thanks!

Thanks, Im stilll new at this writeing buisness.. :p I changed a few things, and used your sugestion about the repitition.