Jennafina

Wow thats deap, it feals swirly, and mistical, and passionate. I like the little tiny peices of images.

Yay!! thanks!

I really like this. Its short and fast paced and confuseing. I haven't read any other vampire stories, so I dont know the standard, but it seams really good. It ...

Your story is cute and short and sweet!! I like it! Its got lots of cool descriptions, I like how you compare the water to the color of slate. I ...

Thanks for all the sugestions! This isn't HP fanfic, though.

Thats funny.. I like how you gave each sneeze scene a title at the end.

I Ageree, it sounds like the start of somthing.. Possibly a story? Or another verse?

I REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS POEM!!! Sorry to wsound so vague, but Im not exactly sure what made me like it so much.. Its REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD!!! :P

I like your poem, It would probably make more sense if I knew you though.. Its funny! :)

this doesn't really remind me of hostages in iraq, but I really really really like it. Its got a tence feal, and I think that it doesn't have to be ...

Its a little hard to read because of the bright yellow font on a white and purple page, but I like the idea of posting it in handwriteing, it makes ...

Its nice...For a report. I think it should be in non fic, instead of si fi, though.

I like this!! its really funny, I cant wait to see the next instalment! I dont get why its R though. Maybe Ill find out later.

That made me laugh. I love the long, rambleing random sentances. And the ongoing joke about the *s.

I completely agree with riababy about religion.. :P I liked how it was so drifty too. The poem that is, not the religion..