Jennafina

The idea is really clever to put every other line in parenthasies (sp). I like how the normal lines rhime with eachother.

Wow, thats cool! I like how it tells little peices of a story.

whats s*n mean? Is it some abreviation?

For some reason, I cant see them.. The link doesnt load.

I LOVE IT!!! Thats awesome!! Its sweet and funny and sad and cool yah.... I Love band geek stories, being one might have somthing to do with it.. :) Have ...

Wow, thats cool, I like the quiet sence of suspence. It has atmosphere.. :)

awww.. Thats sweet.. Its light and happy and cute.. Nice!

Ok, prepare yourself. When I get bored weird things happen, like this song. Actually its not that recent, but I was bored when I wrote it. To the tune of ...

I really liked everything apart from the mention of zombies.. It sounds kind of cheapy. Perhaps you could use a different word.. Apart from that though, it rocks!

you could call it The Blue Danube Waltz.. Or not, perhaps its to irelevent. Yah.. Sorry thats all i have.

I agree with him^^^^^ It kindof repeats its self though.. Keep going!!!

I like all the imagery, especially in the begining about the needle. Its really cool how you do a verse and then a little line at the end that sortof ...

Wow, thats really beautiful. Its like frost, or mist or somthing.

:p Please dont post something with only an emoticon.

It looks really good and really realistic.. Only thing is I cant really tell its gender..