Jennafina

whats with the grapes? I never know what to say about peoples dreams either.

I didn't anticipate the ending, but I thaught it was funny. Its all happy and philosophical(sp?) and then BANG! oops, birds dead, lol.

I basicly agree with everyone, especially the last part. Where hearts are never b r o k e n & tears are never cried. Welcome to my perfect life. Did ...

Thanks snoink, it seams a lot funnyer now. :p :) the orks look really good though, i forgot to say that before.

I agree with everyone else.. Please dont die, that would be sad. The art is really good though.

I didn't even know what acrostic means untill chevy mentioned it in context. I didn't notice. I like the pendulum image and the man in the moon line. Save the ...

I don't get it.

Wow, thats really good for on a computor! you must have really good hand eye coordination.. You are a master! hehehe an MouseMaster!! hehheh jk.. I like how his coat ...

Hello! Hope everytings good and happy and that you like this site!

Hello.. Im relatively new (2 months) aswell.. Hope you stick with this! I comented on your story if you havn't already seen.. I'd rather have cheese than ugly haird managers. ...

Thats nice and well written, a little emo for my taste though.. one thing.. "You don't look old enough to be out this early." "Either do you." do you mean ...

Sorry, didn't mean to breach topic. It was stupid, I hope I didn't offend anyone too badly. Its the alaska thing.. And my spelling ablilties are abismal, I know. Thanks ...

The sea of grey is good. Mine was pretty stupid, I was just throwing out radom ideas.

I think its ok, It is a bit repetitive though on the happyest days of my life part, and some of the rhymes seam a bit pushed.. Incandecence, I love ...

WOw thats the best! I love it! I love all the quick snappy rhymes, and how its dark but not neccessarily all slow and deap.