Jennafina

^^Critiqued my story. Okey, okay. I lied. Its only a little Greek... Sorry. :)

7/10 because I've never seen anything like it.

Brian- Thank you for explaining, I'll fix that. :) Niobe- Treble means high and smooth. I fixed the rest, though. THANKS!

Wow! Thats cool! Awesome! (guess which one's me, lol!) (I'm green!)

0/10. Its ugly. Ha ha ha, no, I'm kidding. 7/10, because its interesting, but not original...

Thanks! I actually don't really know what you mean on the first part. Sorry, but would you mind explaining?

10/10, Very awesome. :D

There was a light through the darkness. One light, a tiny speck of hope that expanded into a column, which grew into a door. A person stepped into it, casting ...

Has a verry.. um... INteresting avatar, lol.

Okay. Sorry. I hope I didn't sound rude...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Sorry its so late :)

8/10 because its... um.. Fuzzy!

Piercings: None, not allowed. I don't really want any on my ears, because ears just get covered up with hair. Nose looks cool, but bellybutton and toung seem really pointless, ...

Wow, thats so sad! Really, really good though! You have the emotions so captured. Sorry to repeat everyone else. One thing.. “Thanks Callie,” she says and I feel her stand. ...

Has a new little sister!