Jennafina

Awww! :) I like how you gradually progress from little kid games to the present, but always with your friend. 'And have blond and green hair and twenty-three piercings' is ...

10/10, LOL! Except for the purk. I don't get the purk.

Wow, that was depressing, but sweet too, somehow. I liked how the reader was inside the main charecter's head. Maybe you could put what he is thinking in italics though, ...

Accompanied by Milan, Lillian disembarked at Formia station. Rather reluctantly, she had agreed to let him stick with her. He had reasured her, and she had no doubt; that he ...

Thanks, BD!!! Any critiques, anybody? :o

10/10 Um.. Now thats planning in advance, lol. :)

8/10. They're both cute, and funny.

Please right more! I'm really interested to hear the whole story. This is like a preview- it lets you know that its going to be good, but doesn't really give ...

Thanks, Yoshi! :)

I like that. It makes me feel like the person is numb, watching their life fly by. Maybe you should call it 'Time'? This line: Chalk white as... Confused me. ...

^Should join the chat room!

^Thinks that the thing on the cat's back is a rocket. Its a scuba tank! :D Lol.. I think...

Okay, these are a bunch of random things! They are numbered for easy critiquing! :D These are some girls. I'm not that good at drawing guys in the anime style ...

Wow, that was sad, and interesting. Very opinionated, lol.

Wow, thats cool. Even if it was easy to make, (which it doesn't really look) it still looks cool! That girl in the back looks really anguished, lol.