Jennafina

Me too! (But you know that, of course, lol.) Its really late here, so if these don't make sense.. its not my fault... (JK) Jonas was now fully formed on ...

5/10. The water looks cool, but it doesn't really make that cool of an avatar.. Is it an aircraft carrier? (I'm not just being vindictive, lol.)

8/10. You said it yourself- she looks too pretty to be a kick *ss siren-like evil Hell-sprite of doom or whatever. And her face is a little pale. And no ...

'Kay. I finished! No more critiques though.

Camael's dramatic entrence through this gaping hole in the ground sure is an anticlimax, lol. When I finished chapter eleven, I was sure it was going to be some monster. ...

6/10. Its well drawn, it looks a little like some type of fantasy warrior perhaps? But a little to far zoomed out. I cant see his face.

'Ragheads' and 'head' don't rhyme, they're the same word. :P What Shreik said applies to me too, lol.

I'm GMT minus nine...

Hehe you evil name stealer you! Actually, I would be honored if you were to name your bird after my Tofu. Like I said, especially if your bird happens to ...

I'm like Snoink, I do it without thinking. Mercifully, I don't own a webcam, lol. Although it would be funny to see how someone discribes my face.

9/10. LOL! Gotta love monk... I guess...

Wow! Thats amazing! :D I don't know what to say that hasn't already been said. Except this: “Maybe she really does,” One says, glancing out my eyes and then moving ...

7/10. Its pretty, but a little long and complicated for a sigi. And... its deap.... :P Sorry.

Thanks, everyone! Marching gurl, you are so cool. :) BlackDaisy, you imagenation snob, you. (jk) :D. Zel: Corrections made. Is this any better? (On Luna, #13.) I made it small, ...

This chapter explained alot. I like how the eyes change color when they use their gifts. Each color seems to fit the person's personality. Suddanly, the prologue makes more sense. ...