Jennafina

That made me think. I like the last line especially, it makes it different. There were alot of typos, though. You should read through it and see. For I few ...

My favorite is the last one. He looks cool and colected, I like his pose, the way the cloths wrinkle... The stomach muscles look a little overdone though. Kinda gross. ...

0_o Ditto Grif. (Kidding.) I'm Jenn, hope to see you around. Nice name, by the way. You sound like you have an interesting life. Start a blog, please! :D

10/10. Awww. LOL, you look pretty.

7/10. Cool, but kinda blury.

3/10. It makes me sad. And I don't really think its funny, if its suposed to be a joke. Sorry, TSA. :(

^^ AMAZING WRITER!!! I love all your work. They always hold my attention. I also like your critiques/coments. Very detailed and funny. Oh. AND you have pretty avatars.

Thanks everybody for the reviews! I've edited. I loved how the pixie and Savanna took themselves very seriously, but you could tell everyone else thought they were nuts. Thanks. I'm ...

Wow... I like this too. Its kind of haunting. The last line, like Dusky and BD said, really makes this different, and memorable. You seem to have changed it though... ...

LOL :) Aw, thats cute. You lose three points because its not punctuated though. :P :evil: 7/10.

The ‘Cappello Povero’ was quite crouded. The bartender, a tall, harried looking woman, was serving glasses of Italy’s famously delicious wine to a variety of happy drunks. Lillian stepped in, ...

Ahhh... *sigh* Kids these days...

^ My Own Rainbow. Sorry, I'm not that good at criting poetry... I did my best..?

The chopyness here really built up the tension, and gave it much more atmosphere than it would otherwise. Ditto Chevy about the lacing me up line; it needs some followthrough. ...

My favorite stanza is the fourth one too. I like how you discribe the snowflakes falling, and the barrier. Want to know something sad? Snip Snip isn't making any of ...