Jennafina

This is the wrong forum. It's for science-fiction stories written by YWS members. To discuss somebody else's science-fiction stories, you should make a new topic in Entertainment/The Lounge, or join ...

I like this all, and you're right, it's alot different from your norm. The tone is pretty cynicle(sp?) and that makes it even better. I have a few coments though... ...

I like the cat too. I also like the shading on the random people, especially on the girl on the left. I like her face too, the eye not covered ...

I take fencing lessons! (Foil.) I'm not good, (I just started) but I want to get better. You sound busy. Nice to meet you, and I hope to see you ...

The old man face recieves an enthusiastic eight, but, unfortunately, I will have to award the second naught but a troublesome two. Seen it too many places, and am getting ...

Wow. As always, I am completely jealous of your amazing unmatchable incredeble poetic ability. I especially like how, though you change subjects alot, each stanza conects with the one before ...

Jeez, you're amazing. I like her hair especially. It falls on her face casualy...? Or something... The goggles are funny, but they make her look a bit like a bug. ...

:) Ah, the familiar fan-products debate. Seen this about fanfiction, too. I do think that its helped. Like RiverGirl said, I think it's a tool. Or something. :p #18. Because ...

Wow, even though I don't understand what this is suposed to mean at all, I really, really like it. It's cool how each discriptive word has a line, and then ...

Niiiiiiiiice. I think the lines in capitals should be in italics... And also, this is poetry, so I don't think it has to be censored. Although, I'm not complaining. **** ...

Nine page critique on MY STORY!!! (Called Asher if you want to see the major crit, its on page two.) Congrats! You totaly deserve this.

Interesting. The writing style seems distant, but it makes me curious to see the rest. His romantic soul was prone to find older beginnings, ideas born from lofty writings or ...

10.5/10!!! Extra credit for animation. THAT IS SO ABSOLUTELY FUNNY!!! *Rolls around quaking with laughter*

Here I am again! Because my review via email was completely substandard and I'm feeling guilty, I've come back. I think I said something like 'I looooove it.' *Bad jennafina! ...

6/10. I have no idea what it is, (do I see half an 'A' there?) but it has this draw to it...