Jennafina

It is just you, us, and the low, saturated clouds in all directions. There is nowhere for you to go, your boat is in splinters, its nets ripped to pieces, ...

Welcome! Congrats on finishing! (Belated thanks, if it's been a while.) My favorite emticon is this: :smt084. Pretty fairy princess! :) I hope to see you around. Maybe you'll post ...

This was certantly interesting ;). Lol, it was funny. However, you have a lot of little errors that need to be fixed. Punctuation! VERY important. :) ~A Lame Demonstration of ...

7/10 for vaguely Naruto-esque anime ninja character. :) lol.

Wow! I like it! The first sentence has really nice imagry. For the rest of my critique, I'm instead of quote marks, I'm going to use italics, because they take ...

"Mother," Betsy called, entering her mother's bedroom, "I am going to die." Mother observed her, unamused. "You are going to die?" "I am going," Betsy repeated, slowly and patiently, "to ...

That was cute! It was kid-ish, but not poorly done at all. I'm interested to see what the teacher does to the poor kid with dreams, but it works as ...

Hello! *does SPLOOSH homework* In Greek Mythology, the dwelling of the blessed paradise, situated at the end of the world. This sentence doesn't make sence. Maybe it could be combined ...

Since this is set in japan, I think the students would call Mr. Brice 'Sensei'.

Oh dear... Blade incest. :lol: Looks like Fishr got most of this, but I do have one thing. I feel...and I lust. With the katana I cut off my clothing. ...

Hey Hannah! Great to see another story! :) She pulled back the stray strands of long brown hair that hung loose around her shoulders, framing her face and setting alight ...

For some reason, when I use the dark one, it makes a line across the left side of the window. It's about a centimeter thick. I can't click the links ...

He proposed to you!??!? What did you say? Are you going to marry him? ;) jk You are so pretty! I love your hair...

The first thing I noticed, even before I read any of this, is that it's completely clumped up. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE make some spaces! It hurts my eyes.... ow... Okay, ...

It reminds me of an inkblot image. It looks like different things depending on the way you look at it. I also think it would make great computer wallpaper if ...