Jenita

Yes, some of them were a tad blurry, but it doesn't matter so much if you lean away from the screen. I especially liked numbers three, eight, and fourteen. :D

Hi! :D Well, aside from the weird spaces in between bunches of paragraphs, it's an interesting beginning. The ending immediately brought to mind snow white -- does this have anything ...

Regardless of what anyone else thinks, I loved the part about Ixchel. If I read that in a book in a book store I would definitely buy it. :D Umm... ...

I like the names too. The Yerrida part sounds cool, but the Empire part sounds very Star-Wars-esque to me. What's with all the Empires lately? No offense. I'm sure yours ...

Cool. Nice piece of writing here. I'm glad Kitty caught all the typos, because I would probably have been too lazy to go back and find them. ;) I have ...

"The pen is mightier than the sword, but only if the sword is very small and the pen is very sharp." ~Terry Pratchett, The Light Fantastic

I like all of them a bit. I haven't finished the Trickster series yet, but I'm working on it! Will of the Empress was probably the most amazing to me ...

I read most of the harry potter in third grade! it is definitly a lower reading level than inhereitance. The age you read a book at is not the same ...

Otherwise, they are fairly good books, but nothing extra-special. I think I'd have to agree with that. They were fun books, though, and I'll probably reread them someday... and recommend ...

Anyone read the Beka Cooper that just came out (or, rather, came out in November but my city's deprived library just got a copy)? I'm reading that right now and ...

Yeah, Google. Go Google!!!!!!!!!! -Lol Yes, it was all the fault of that search engine... I was trying to find the guidelines to my school's young authors program and this ...

Tolkien...(WoW! What a BIG surprise!!). Well that was a waste of 10 points... Oh well! Ha, you'll never guess who mine is... J. K. Rowling! :D I do love my ...

Cool story, nice short read, and, of course, amusing. Only two specifics: Your first sentence... seems a bit off to me, as if it doesn't match style-wise the rest of ...

Thank you for commenting, people. Some of the people in chapter one are the same people from the prologue, and that becomes clearer later, I hope.

Hello. I love your avatar. I was reading one of your other stories the other day... did I comment on it? I can't remember. Darn this thing called a short-term ...