Jeni

Nice. Everything is pretty good, it's a well written chapter. Maybe you could have added a little bit more.-jeni p.s Can't wait to read more!

who is pat buchanan?(I'm not good with names.)-jeni

I think it was really great. There were only a few problems that I came across. One was punctuation. Somewhere in there after a short sentence, (about 15-20 words long), ...

Mine was other. i like Spanish right now, so maybe when you re-do it, you should out Foreign Languages on there.

Nice. I can't wait to read more. The only thing is, make sure you connect the stories. Everything did go well. This one wasn't as long, so that's good.-jeni

like you said, it was long. it was good, there was a lot of detail. i really liked it.-jeni p.s it was long

it was good. there was a lot of detail, and good at spacing. that's one thing i am not good at. in the beginning, it was a little hard to ...

Dear Diary, Hi. You know how Ms. Dothingham, the assistant attorney, sent me the letter about Mr. Caveno’s release? Well, two days ago, that date passed. Today it is October ...

I like it a lot!It is really funny too.-Jeni

the picture is good. It could be darker.-jeni

[pre]Hello. Please remember that this girl lives in a Spanish community, and that is why she knows so much Spanish. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear D

I really like it, but make sure to watch capitalization, you forgot a few.-Jeni

I like it. It's a little dark in the face, but that's okay. I love the realness of the hair by the way.-Jeni

[pre] Dear Diary, Hey, and of course it's me! I will be starting 5th grade soon! I am more excited then I think I ever have been! Mamà Marìa said ...

I think the white marks fit well. The cat is the only orange-ish color there, so the white makes it blend. Nice job!-Jeni