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Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 1 of 2)
WOW!Very interesting!I like it!I can almost feel her pain.When you say this: But Robert hadn’t found any girls he found suitable enough for marriage, and the job he had paid ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Ali's Hot Dogs *Edited*
This is an amazing story line I love it! The only thing that I could see was that the end sentence wasn't to grabbing! I think it should be more ...
Nov 22, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 3
You have great writing potential like it a lot ! One thing I noticed is that you skip to diffrent dramatic thing that happened pretty fast!Maybe try to talk about ...
Nov 22, 2010