JayBe

Chapter One : An Elapser no more. I stood at the edge of the cliff, looking down at the river, a good hundred or so feet below. The sun was ...

I really don't know what to think about this story. haha It made me laugh thats for sure. I noticed that you described Nathan but you never described the person ...

I loved how it starts out suspensful. It really draws the reader in and your fisrt paragraph was excellent! The one thing I want to know is what are his ...

Thank you much!

Alright, just to prevent confusion, this story switches through different characters but mainly focuses on Adelie and Falon. I haven't exactly established chapters yet because this is only my first ...

So I am really unsure how to rate my stories. How am I supposed to know which age its appropriate for. I mean i know for sure that it will ...

Alright, my first review or whatever you would like to call it. :D I really liked it, but the 1st chapter lacked some details and it was kind of short. ...

I'm feeling a little overwhelmed. And i am having trouble with the whole no grammar mistakes and txt talk. Actually it took me about five tries for those first two ...