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I'm writing a story. The plot is thus: Lulu Clatchey breaks her neck and dies. She then decides to apply to be a guardian angel, and ends up getting assigned ...

I would put them both in first person, with chapter titles like Antigone suggested.

Ah, what an interesting idea. You've definitely thought a lot about it, and covered details. I can see it will develop into a global-scale war. Maribelle definitely won't be able ...

Hey, cool! It sounds very adventurous, and also quite sweet. I would make the characters younger than college-age though. (You don't usually see college students in adventure stories). I'm very ...

This site: has really interesting information and resources on names.

I see different bits of myself in my characters. That's part of the fun of writing.

This should really be in the writing section-under 'Writing' you'll see 'submit something'. But since you only joined yesterday, I'll give you a pass. Also, people need some time to ...

I like Tori's idea of using Annabel. Other ideas: Valerie Ariella or Arielle Gabriella Lucinda Aurelia Elodie Isabella Isadora

Everything has a niche. Some are bigger than others, and some are much more widely appealing than others. If you are considering writing as a career, you do need to ...

The basic premise: Chuck is a young god sent to Earth to do a research mission. If he succeeds in this mission, he will be granted the powers of an ...

Keep with one idea at a time! Don't try to write half a dozen things at once. You will go crazy and not have time for anything else. I suggest ...

Why don't you post some here, and get some advice and encouragement? 170 pages is impressive. My stories average 30-50 pages. I suggest you post the first chapter, or the ...

Sounds brilliant-In the story I'm editing/refining, I'm trying to get the teen drama-paranormal balance, so I'll be watching this to see what ideas you have.

He could be able to gain super-strength by hugging people! Nourishment for the soul and all that. It could also make for some interesting soap-style drama.

Breaking the fourth wall makes my heart sing and dance with joy. It makes the beautiful flowers bloom and the first rays of sunshine burst forth into the frost-edged summer ...