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Welcome to YWS, UnknownR! I found the site pretty confusing too when I first joined, But I find the people here really inspirational and welcoming. I look forward to seeing ...

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Welcome to YWS Faithe! In the short time I've been here, I've found the members here to be extremely friendly and helpful. I'm also pretty Internet-illiterate but if you need ...

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Very poetic and captivating. It took me a while to figure out what it was about but I think it's reflecting on the journey of life, looking backwards as well ...

I really liked this, which for me is rare with an emotional love poem. It had me rooting for the narrator and I really enjoyed the conflicting feelings. I would ...

I was pleasantly surprised with that first chapter. The beginning paragraph made me think "oh, this is going to be all emo and depressing". I thought it would be pretentiously ...

I loved this poem-it was very creative and clever with lots of imagery. The last line should be: "they who will find the one who deserves their heart is the ...

It seemed kind of limp and droopy to me-the narrator, that is. They sound pathetic and needy, to be honest. I would also suggest making the lines longer-it would work ...

I like how emotion is expressed, while at the same time the poem isn't drowning on it-the pacing is kept up. I actually think this could work a lot better ...

I liked this essay and I agree with your point too! People seem to think sarcasm is inherently bad. It's true, people can be sarcastic and hurtful, but not all ...

Very poetic and well-written poem. In the first line it should be 'livelihood' where it seys 'lively hood'. Also, this bit "The feet cringed as the weight of the dancers ...

I prefer this version to the original. The only problems I have is the title "Stairway to Heaven" seems overdone, and I wasn't expecting the narrator to be named Skip. ...

Probably anything by Paul Jennings.

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