Jataani

I knew I did something with the tenses... I do that a lot. In my other posts I'm working on not doing that so much, and I haven't seen anyone ...

Hahaha. I don't think you're being rude! I appreciate the help. :) The next little section I post will have more details. It's probably going to be why they thought ...

This is kind of long, but either way, rip it to shreds. I like to correct myself. Some descriptions: Ace: 19, blue eyes, brown, straight hair. Akira: 19, Ace's twin, ...

I didn't come up with this. It belongs to a friend of mine. Though, I do see what you mean. :/ I had trouble not correcting this the whole time ...

Thanks, though, I'm not surprised to see that my laptop forgot the "a" in "that". This thing is wearing down on me...

I can hear the rustling sound the leaves made when the wind kissed them gently. I can smell blood flowing with the midnight breeze. I stood, breathing in the cold ...