JasperSkye

i really liked this poem. the imagine it painted in my mind was...different ? in a good way. i imagined the old train just sitting there on the tracks for ...

Anthony, this is your girlfriend commenting on your poem x) Hahaha...Thank you, my dear. I really liked it. :)

"How busy and scary life can be, and that you will get nowhere without facing your fears." This is what you told me the meaning behind this poem of yours ...

I know this poem is not very descriptive (and maybe cliched as someone told me...) but it was hard to find the words when you really haven't done all the ...

Anthony, I love you. This is...wow. I'm in tears right now. x) God...Anyways, thank you. Hahaha. I'm glad I got you to read my story, otherwise you would have never ...

ANNNNTHONY!! You're silly, but I love you too. :)

I really liked it. Especially the dialouge between the "narrator" and the sun. Very good. I felt it had a second meaning as well. As though the sun wasn't really ...

Yes...I do know your name x)

It was precious, indeed. Very very cute and innocent. Filled with life, for sure. You actually have really good rhyming (spelled that wrong probably. its late. i could care less ...

............If there are any errors, I am sorry. It's really late and I'm not paying close attention to my typing skills at the moment. Enjoy anyways. Please review...you guys help ...

I am a big Harry Potter fan and this just made my entire WEEK! I loved it. It tied everything together rather well. I am also a big fan of...YOU. ...

very good. :) at first i clicked on it thinking "what is this going to be?" and then i saw it and was like "holy smokes. sexy drawing." x) anyway...very ...

earlier your sister posted this and i'm so very glad to see that you made an account here. anyways, this is exactly what i said earlier when she posted it ...

Well...Your sister did a very good job on the poem. I love the "I have been enveloped by madness" part. As for making her an account, make it. I would ...

Wow...I was in tears by the end of that story. I almost saw it coming, Hanna being killed and all but I didn't want to believe it. This makes me ...