JasperSkye

This story made me a good way, of course. You see, my father left when I was very young, so I never really got to know him so reading this ...

I am so sorry if the names get mixed up along the way. Rebecca/Skye is the main character, the girl. Charlie/Jake is the brother. I know...I'm stupid for changing the ...

Hmm...I'm not quite sure how to review this poem. I adore it, that's for sure but other than that...I don't really have any other comments about it. Well, I mean...I ...

I actually enjoyed reading this poem. It was all so very unique from the formatting of the poem itself to the word choice you chose. Over all, I think you ...

How...Interesting. Definitely lovin' the cheese-burger-eating Zombie. That just made my day, so thank you for that.

I really liked all of those pictures. You did a great job of capturing the beauty in them and I applaud you for that. Normally, when I look through other ...

Wow. You did a really...like REALLY good job with this poem. If this is what has happened to you in real life then Bless your Sould. I will be praying ...

At first I wasn't sure exactly how I felt about this poem and then I realized that I actually quite like it. Although a few people say that you should ...

i would really appreciate a review on the first chapter of my short story "Trouble, My Favorite" ..

oh my gosh...i absolutely love this. so innocent. beautifully written, my friend.

I am aware that this poem doesn't exactly have structure and isn't very detailed or anything. I just sort of wrote it late last night and thought I should share ...

Very well written. Your poem seemed to kind of speak to me, but not exactly. You know? It was the fact that it was so truthful that really seemed to ...

Wow. Beautifully written. You really captured the emotion in this poem. Very very very amazing!! I love it.

Awwww. Piggies. Soooo cute. I love it. :3 Hahaha...Very good job. Did you do that? If so, bravo to you.

oh my...wow. this short story...it's incredible. it's also very sad. i broke down crying at the end when it said : "Dad?" "Yes? "I love you." "I know. Go outside ...