Jaskan

thanks, the next bit will probably come in a week or two, im working on it :lol:

thanks for that, this isn't my usual theme in my story's and I'm not great at grammar so cheers for the help, ill see if i can edit some of ...

[pre]Im writing this 'short story' (which allways seems to be a problem with me as they turn into epics!) and just wandered what people thaught. this section ends quite abruptly ...

Great stuff, i never knew that about the mongols! i thought i had battle writing kinda sussed even though i have only done it a couple of times. however you ...

I'm quite different from most of you guys, i could be called obsessive about how much detail Ive put into my character, however that's mainly just for my own enjoyment, ...

Hi im Bobby, but I dont mind being called Jaskan (the name of my main charicter) or whatever. im 12 and live in Cumbria, England and have never really done ...