Jas

Hey, For your first attempt, this was very good! I thought this was a really cute, carefree poem and even though it was a *little* short, it was very sweet. ...

Hey, I didn't actually read this but I just wanted to say that this should be in the fanfiction section, not here. Just by skimming, I can tell you need ...

xD Hope shrine it is! Lol, there is no such thing as too much writing (Even if most of it is crap). ~Jas

xD That was kind of the point. Nano stories are basically Fillerplotfillerfillerplotfillerfillerfillerplottwist!fillerfillerfillerCHARACTERDEATHfillerfiller etc. I don't really have high hopes for thi

Hey, I didn't really like this chapter. It is very, very unlikely that their are two sets of twins in a family so I suggest taking changing that. In fact, ...

Hey, I'm sort of confused. I'm not sure whether this is a story or a prologue or anything. First of all, Welcome to YWS! :D Back to the story, your ...

Hey, I adore this. It was the cutest little piece and I love how you've had this girls best friend be taken away by this other girl, that may signify ...

I'll try. :D I've never actually done that before...I sort of just write. xD Thanks! ~Jas

Could you please review this? THANKIES!

Africa = Thanks so much for the review! I really used it to help me, because as Snoink said, I really don't what I'm trying to point out with this ...

Hey, I really liked this piece. You captured the voice of a little girl very well, though I didn't understand the prompt you were told to work with. :p One ...

You know you love me ;D Hmm, I dunno, you want points? Or a Facebook status dedicated to how amazing you are? Or reviews from me (My reviews suck)? Or ...

Wow, I'm in the top 200..that's amazing for ME! I figured I'd be down there in the lowly 300s.

this open? I HAVE ANOTHER DARE FOR YOUSE! Yeah, Imma jerk, Hopeh darling. Review everything of mine, that you haven't reviewed yet. I BET YOU CAN'T DO IT. Can't take ...

Hey, I applaud you for being able to write in such a difficult characters voice. This is a pretty taboo topic and to be able to pull it off, it ...