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Hey, I liked this but I think it needs some help. It read as a story, as sentences rather than a poem. It's a bit choppy at times and there ...

Hey, I love this. I saw Mr. Shadow Man as either Death or one of the psycho voices in her head. I love the little rhyme thing. I love the ...

I didn't find the title confusing, unless she changed it! :D Hmm, I was part of a couple that finished, even though I didn't stick with them. The Robin Hood ...

Hey, I'm pretty sure retarded is more offensive than poop. Anywho, this is extremely confusing. At first, I thought Cassandra was the famous "her" then you mentioned slapping (Domestic abuse?) ...

LAV IT SKINSY! I'll have mine up ASAP.

Hey, This was a gorgeous read. I literally, have nothing to critique. which is a first for me. Just a tinnnnnny suggestion, make this longer and put it in Romantic ...

Oh and the 'everything and nothing' was done purposely.

RELLEH? YAY! Okay so: Thanks!

In over four hours, I have produced a grand total of one review. I suck,

Thanks Horus! Yeah, I have to fiddle with the rhythm a bit. :)

Don't watch it if you mind mild cursing. It's hilarious though xDD

Thanks Skins! I er made a mistake though. I gave you the wrong link. >.

Hey, So I really liked this. At times, it was a bit rushed and the dialogue was awkward occasionally, but overall this was really great. You have great imagery and ...

If you could review that I'd be mucho happeh! :D

Could you review that please :) THANKS SKINSY!