Jas

I'm pretty sure that Snoink is going to lock this now. xD

I was 4th! Yay! Anyway, xongrats everyone and Happy Review Day! Well. Not anymore, but it was and well, I should shut up.

Christmas, New Years, school holidays and sun. :D You have Christmas in the summer!? So much for chestnuts roasting on an open fire, Jack Frost nipping at your nose, eh?

This is my Poetry Pairs entry entry with ToriTheMonster who is epic and SHOULD BE ONLINE CUS WE NEED A FREAKIN' TITLE. Be as harsh as you can. We worked ...

Aw, I don't exactly know you very well, but you'd honestly give up YWS in total just because of some arguments? You can ignore people, or give up your role ...

Hey, This was a good start but I felt like it was too short. For some strange reason, people these days seem to think that slapping together four paragraphs will ...

Hey, I honestly don't want to be harsh, but by the fourth paragraph I was pushing myself to keep going. It's not that the topic was boring because I love ...

Hey, This was very good. I liked your use of vocabulary and especially your imagery and descriptions. However, the topic/theme was less than great. It was unoriginal and I'm sort ...

Welcome to YWS! What types of things do you like to write? ~Jas

To Misstoria who said 'Just because we have a black president, doesn't mean we like him': Hon, speak for yourself. He wouldn't have won the vote if he wasn't liked. ...

Hey, Sixty-two likes. Sixty-one reviews. Holy crap. That's the most likes I've EVER seen a piece get. Woah. You totally deserve it though, this story was brilliant. ~Jas

Hiya! WELCOME TO YWS! This place is epic. Honestly. So you write poetry, huh? That's cool and I'm sure you'll see that we don't have the same old same old ...

Hey, I lovelovelovvvve this piece. From the first sentence, I knew it would be good. I *kind* of expected the ending though, especially when you said Aden was disturbed and ...

Hey, I liked this poem. The meter was good, the rhyme scheme was good and the flow was steady. One problem, the first stanza had the rhyme 'thicker' and 'picture'. ...

Hey, This read as maybe a diary entry or something. I liked the use of second person mixed with first person. Hmm, I too felt it was lacking. This really ...