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Hey, I agree with Amfliflier, this was like a movie on fast-forward. What you need to do is expand this chapter and thoroughly explain each aspect of the plan/pact thing. ...

Hey, No, I don't think you understand. I don't mean I don't like first-person. I mean, sentences like 'How I wanted to see my little sister again!' irritate me because ...

I have 10 poems to do. HERE ARE SOME CONVENIENT HAIKUS. Failure 21: Heaven is lovely, he swore. But where are the keys to the silver gates? Failure 22: Her ...

Hey, I liked this but the format annoyed me. It bothered my eyes and made it hard to connect the sentences. You're MC really resounded with me because I'm having ...

Hey, Very well-written piece. It was rather short and while this might be great for class, I think you can expand on it much more. You also use many fragments ...

Pain was hidden in the palms of his hands. It seeped out, dripping onto her skin every time she said something wrong. Novas exploded in her head whenever he started, ...

Ooh, I wanna be in this! If you can, I'd like to be semi-tan with crazy curls and glasses. If you're doing details, I have boring brown eyes. :)

Thanks :D

I have about 9 to do to catch up. I got reeeally sick of poetry for a while.

Are there chickens in the White House?

I reeeally love all your most recent poems! :D 17 was brilliant!

Does Obama look like a squirrel?

Yum. MAH TURN.

Do you sleep in my kitchen?

Please and thank you! :D