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Nova "Hey, Lolli, couldn't use make someone find us a really safe place to live and never be found?" I asked, after her display of magic sandwhiches and cigarrettes. She ...

Nova I turned my body over and over in a wild attempt to get into a comfortable position. Lolli snored in the tree on my right, Kaylie and Carley on ...

Hey, Welcome to YWS! As Violet said, the first part completely ruins the story. You just gave us the intro and conflict in five sentences. I can't even read this ...

Hey, Maybe I'm weird or something, but I don't get it. Is this something that happened to you? Did you find this letter? Is it the beginning to another story? ...

Hey, So everyone got the grammar and such so I'm just here to say that I liked the repetion but maybe you over did it a little. Other than that, ...

Same thing happens to me all the time. I write really good first chapters or I have really good ideas, then I start it and never look back. It's annoying. ...

I have a burn-out right now. I'm trying to write but it's just something I don't want to do. I start writing then I get sdistracted by the internet. Even ...

For being my twin :D And knowing that moustaches are FTW.

I would but, lol, I just posted. :p I think that our "group" should go to sleep then meet you in the forest or something the next morning, because all ...

Nova I was focusing my attention on Lollie, relieving her hang over and pushing the energy into the nearby tree. The oak shook a little and seemed to sag a ...

Hey there! Guess you got my PM ;D So, as I said before I really like this. The character is believable, the flow is great and it's a very good ...

Who, do you mean RedSmiles?

James is just some guy that Brooke had a crush on. That's kind of funny. I'm watching HP 6 and Harry just mention his father. OOPS. Typo, lol James = ...

Very nice :)

I'm sorry, I always hate it when people do this, but could someone introduce me?