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Re: Eyecatching First Lines
I always wanted to write a story with the beginning: You're dead. I don't know why, but that always seemed like a good opener. :D
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: The Ashheim Academy (A Harry Potter Universe Tale)
I'm not really into this SB anymore. Sorry. You could kill off my character or just let her sink into the backround :)
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Gone
Super sorry guys. I was on a cruise. :) Back now. Whoever wants to start it can start it, because I don't have a lot of time. ~Jasmine
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Distraught: Chapter 1
Hey, Since this seems to be in a Medieval time period, I would recommend putting it in the History forum or Fantasy forum. :) I don't really like Medieval time ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Killer Mask [0.09]
Hey, Lol, as ususal I like it. I can definitely see this becoming a novel. I like the character Mona and the cafeteria scene but this would have been the ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Gone
Fox, your profile is good but the kids don't get powers unless they already lived in Peridido beach and pets don't dissapear, only people after the poof. She had to ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Gone
Okay, I guess :)
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Gone
I'll be making a Coates character too. Actually, Melinda will just be Coates instead. :D
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Gone
If you really want to, okay.
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Gone
Sure :) Oh yeah, forgot to say, please control only one or two, but those two should be adjacent like fire and water or earth and air. Thanks :D
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Gone
I like your profile TPO, only thing is the name. This isn't a Star Wars book or LOtR. The names in the book are way normal like Sam and Diana ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~
Thanks! Later on it will be told that the girls' mother recently left for random trips but always leaves a note or calls or something. I'm not going to keep ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Killer Mask [0.08]
Hey, This was much, much better. I think that this might have been your best chapter format wise. I think that you aren't giving us the insight that we got ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~
Prologue You wake up one morning and instead of seeing your mom setting eggs and bacon on the red kitchen table, you find you're father sitting down with an alarmed ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: Gone
Yay!
Jun 22, 2010
