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Jas

  • Writing Tips Re: Eyecatching First Lines

    I always wanted to write a story with the beginning: You're dead. I don't know why, but that always seemed like a good opener. :D

    Jul 1, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Ashheim Academy (A Harry Potter Universe Tale)

    I'm not really into this SB anymore. Sorry. You could kill off my character or just let her sink into the backround :)

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Super sorry guys. I was on a cruise. :) Back now. Whoever wants to start it can start it, because I don't have a lot of time. ~Jasmine

    Jun 28, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Distraught: Chapter 1

    Hey, Since this seems to be in a Medieval time period, I would recommend putting it in the History forum or Fantasy forum. :) I don't really like Medieval time ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Killer Mask [0.09]

    Hey, Lol, as ususal I like it. I can definitely see this becoming a novel. I like the character Mona and the cafeteria scene but this would have been the ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Fox, your profile is good but the kids don't get powers unless they already lived in Peridido beach and pets don't dissapear, only people after the poof. She had to ...

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Okay, I guess :)

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    I'll be making a Coates character too. Actually, Melinda will just be Coates instead. :D

    Jun 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    If you really want to, okay.

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Sure :) Oh yeah, forgot to say, please control only one or two, but those two should be adjacent like fire and water or earth and air. Thanks :D

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    I like your profile TPO, only thing is the name. This isn't a Star Wars book or LOtR. The names in the book are way normal like Sam and Diana ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~

    Thanks! Later on it will be told that the girls' mother recently left for random trips but always leaves a note or calls or something. I'm not going to keep ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Killer Mask [0.08]

    Hey, This was much, much better. I think that this might have been your best chapter format wise. I think that you aren't giving us the insight that we got ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: The Last Girls in the World ~Prologue~

    Prologue You wake up one morning and instead of seeing your mom setting eggs and bacon on the red kitchen table, you find you're father sitting down with an alarmed ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Archive Re: Gone

    Yay!

    Jun 22, 2010


There’s always a story. It’s all stories, really. The sun coming up every day is a story. Everything’s got a story in it. Change the story, change the world.
— Terry Pratchett