Jas

Hey, This was an interesting prologue and I liked it. However, it seemed a bit awkward in the third paragraph because you gave us a little too much info. Prologue's ...

The moment Annette turned her phone on, it immediately buzzed with a text. She took another bite of her everything bagel with butter, grabbed her coffee from the microwave then ...

Pencil, this is all in fun. Nothing serious at all, hence it being in the Randomness forum. Sakin and Amu . (Forsakinshadow and allmixedup). :twisted: My nickname is sticking! YAY! ...

Haha, I have no idea who any of those people in Otaku's playlist are.

Ugh. Never brush my teeth. Monkey tails are freaky. Would you rather listen to Baby by Justin Beiber over and over for the rest of your life or Never listen ...

I'm going to be very unknowledgeable and tourist-in-NYC like and say that J.K. Rowling's descriptions suck. They are just horrible in my opinion. At times, she spends 3 chapters describing ...

Hey, Now that I've read how Richard is acting and how Tori takes it, I'm not liking it that much. I think that Tori should have stood up to Richard ...

I call a girl from NYC! :D

Wow. That was extremely sad. I hope this isn't true..if it is, I'm really sorry. Well, onto the review. There are some parts where your descriptions are prety weak, like ...

Hey, I was wondering if you would review this. It's the first chapter of this story I'm trying out. :D Thanks ~Jas

I like this. I think that this was a cute little poem but as other reviewers said-go further. You can make this way longer, explain why it isn't blue or ...

Hey, Can I guess what's going to happen? Richard- Killed his brother to get the fortune OR will hit Victoria Victoria- will end up with Oliver Oliver- will end up ...

I think that the first mistake you made was when you told us your interpretation of the poem. If I had just read it normally, I wouldn't have seen the ...

0.1 Beep, beep, beep, beep. Annette groaned as the shrill alarm beeps woke her from slumber. She pulled the satin laced pillow over her now golden hair and tried to ...

Gah. That reminds me of the sixth sense, when the little kid drew pictures of dead people and people dying and stuff.