Jas

Hey, Aw, this was cute. I liked it but thought you could add a lot more to it. It was short enough that just by looking down I saw pick-up ...

Hey, So I have to say this was my favorite chapter. It was just amazing. The descriptions were good, the dialogue was believable, I really liked this. :D I didn't ...

Hey person who I've never met before in my life. Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here! :) I'm pretty sure you're a good writer, not that I've ...

Haha, you're last paragragh was hilarious, Snoink. Thanks for the review!

Hey, Quite frankly, this wasn't as terrible as you made it out to be. It was intelligent and to me, a teenager who doesn't really enjoy reading essays, I found ...

Gills

Wait...who's Big Brother? Is that a member or a robot?

Well, I er, went to Canada. Yay Moose! I also went to Pennsylvania to Hershey's World of Chocolate. That was epicly awesome.

Thanks! That's like the best thing you can tell a writer :) So when are you going to start posting stuff?

Pencil, this is all in fun. Nothing serious at all, hence it being in the Randomness forum. Sakin and Amu . (Forsakinshadow and allmixedup). :twisted: My nickname is sticking! YAY! ...

I love yours too. It's like the polar bear was having this sort of day: Polar Bear: (Goes up to Momma Bear) Will you get me that awesome penguin over ...

Whhhhhat? Where did it go? I thought this period as the title thing was purposely put as the title and I figured it would be awesome. What happened?

Hey there, Guess what time is it? Nope, not 1AM. Nope, not 2AM. It's 3AM! Yay! Anyway, I'm in a pretty loopy mood so don't take anything I say seriously. ...

Hey, Thanks for re-posting the link and sorry for taking so long to do this :) I think that this was good but maybe you overdid it on the descriptions. ...

Oh um. It's locked. .... Anyone want a review? P.S. Hope, I really want to review that, but I'd think it would be awkward to do it here. Would you ...