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I'm looking at you Don't know what to say I'm so lost in your eyes I know what lies awake [chorus] Hey look at me I'm standing here all alone ...

Well with Maddie she thinks they may have met and she is falling for him; however, Aeron is not real sure of his feelings. In the chapter there is a ...

Chapter 9 Raid on Te’are They were planning to invade another city that week. Word of Aeron and Zorach had swept the nation in a days time. The king was ...

Chapter 7 Raid on De’ad           The next couple of days were hectic. Everybody was in an uproar; Aeron was nervous about the raid and also mad at Zorach for ...

Chapter 5 Across the Lake Aeron made himself invisible behind the supply shed. “Are you ready?” Asked Zorach “I think so yeah.” “Let’s go now.” They started toward the nearest ...

Chapter 3 The Voyage to De’ad He awoke to find himself in the forest. He looked around and noticed a fire ringed with stone and a pot of meat already ...

In the following chapters, I have shown more of Aeron's past. So read the third chapter. Thanks, J. E. S. U. S.

Well, I don't want to give away the coming chapters, but the prologue was to introduce the reader to something towards the end of book 1. I would have posted ...

Like I said guys, I wrote this about a year ago. Now that I'm almost finished I've really matured. I went to writing classes and had my Accelerated writing teacher ...

Thank you all for your help. As I said everything here I wrote about a year ago and now my writing is more matured. J. E. S. U. S.

this is what you wrote he started facing anywhere, I would change the anywhere to everywhere. But, it was really good. You should check out some of my stories. The ...

The Dragon War Chapter One: The New Dragon It was a sunny day in the mountains near Belguim, Ukran. A teenaged male named Aeron was hunting there. He saw a ...

Prologue The Prophecy "Yes mother." Zina said as she came to her mother's call. "What do you need?" "Listen very close. Go to Queen Izlans. Go and do her bidding. ...

Yes I agree with Stella. But I do like the story. At the end, was that a prophecy?

I seem to like but it needs more pop! You should really work on scenery detail too. The last book I wrote I had to do over the first six ...