Janis

Lol I thought it was very ingenous and certainly true. I loved the part when you mention; you enter the stall and a swirl of a.c breeze unpleasantly brushes your ...

Nice! Let's see... Your poem is simple but strong. The good thing about it is that you know who your speaker is and what he/she is talking about. I like ...

Nice poem! I love how you made it all so abstract and evenso, how it's all so true. Your punctuation, spelling and main idea is very good! However, the only ...

Good! *applause* There isn't much to say, for your poem is very well structured, punctuated and has a strong idea. Keep it up! However, I certainly agree with xhalcyonx128, you ...

Ok... Not bad. Let's see. Your beggining is strong. It captures the reader's attention; "There is no steel in the City But the pavement on my block Looking over my ...