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Janis

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Shopping

    Lol I thought it was very ingenous and certainly true. I loved the part when you mention; you enter the stall and a swirl of a.c breeze unpleasantly brushes your ...

    Nov 25, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Life

    Nice! Let's see... Your poem is simple but strong. The good thing about it is that you know who your speaker is and what he/she is talking about. I like ...

    Nov 25, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Another Lost Soul

    Nice poem! I love how you made it all so abstract and evenso, how it's all so true. Your punctuation, spelling and main idea is very good! However, the only ...

    Nov 25, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Listener

    Good! *applause* There isn't much to say, for your poem is very well structured, punctuated and has a strong idea. Keep it up! However, I certainly agree with xhalcyonx128, you ...

    Nov 25, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Blue Manhattan

    Ok... Not bad. Let's see. Your beggining is strong. It captures the reader's attention; "There is no steel in the City But the pavement on my block Looking over my ...

    Nov 25, 2007


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien