JaneThermopolis

Might possibly post a second part to this....maybe..

So funny! Thanks for a good laugh! :)

I'm not really going to review this, but I definitely really liked this poem. It's original, and I like how you didn't structure it around any rhymes or rhythms. The ...

Great story! Loved the interaction and dialogue between the characters. I do agree with the others though; its incomplete so you need to post another part! Keep writing, Jane

(The anticipated Part 2 everybody!! By the way, this is a shorter part, only because Part 3 is going to be a lot longer. Hope you like it!!) Williams Beach ...

Oh BTW ziggiefred, I really liked your poem Another Fight! Please keep writing! I believe I reviewed it!

Wow, I really liked this a lot. It was good in a totally simplistic way, and you also got the point across easily. Good job, Jane

Thank you SOOOOOO Much!!!! :)

This piece honestly sounds like the Breaking Dawn wedding scene, kind of unoriginal.

I actually liked this a lot! A couple nitpicks though: Was it a bad idea to meet you there, That day that was fair When I saw you walking down ...

(A new 3 Part short-story I'm writing! Hope you like it. BTW: Something is wrong with the spacing between the lines of the story, so just try to ignore it. ...

This was absolutely, positively beautiful. I have no nitpicks to point out. Great job! Please please please KEEP WRITING! -Jane

Thanks for the input! Hopefully I'll edit this and then put it in the novels section.

I also enjoyed this poem and thought this was well written. However, I have one nitpick: As I walk through this house of shadows; I feel terror in the air. ...

Liked this. In my opinion, it was better than Chapter 2 but I really did enjoy Chapter 1 a lot more. I liked the scene where the girl is at ...