JaneThermopolis

I realize that you get points everytime you review someone's work, but what do you do with the points once you get them? Can you get or buy anything with ...

I also don't really like the title of this poem at all, but the poem, in fact, was excellent. It had excellent flow and it easily described so many complex ...

I thought this was a really cool story...although there was something about it that really didn't make me like it as much as I thought I would. For some reason, ...

I also liked Catch Me and Here We Go Again, but the highlight of her album for me was Remember December. That's a really catchy tune, plus the music video ...

A new story I thought of last night, I only posted a little bit of it just because I wasn't sure of how it was going to be received. This ...

I actually loved Wicked, so when I read this, I was really surprised that even though you said that you were making fun of it, I found it highly entertaining. ...

Pretty interesting poem...cute too... But unfortunately...I've got a couple nit-picks... "Her diluted dreams drift and pass in the air does she dream of me?" There should be a period between ...

I thought this was a really cute story, though we really don't get any information about the characters, we do know that there's a girl who really really likes this ...

Thanks, thehobbitgangster, for pointing that error out because I didn't notice it before. Just fixed it!

Thanks for the crits!! :)

I don't really know why, but I didn't really enjoy the piece very much. I did like these lines though: "Like a rock, you only saw the soft part on ...

This definitely has a raw and real feeling behind it, however, if you want it to be lyrics for a song it really needs to have a chorus, some verses, ...

This was really cute! I actually played this to the song and it was 98% accurate!!! Good job and Keep writing! -Jane

Nice poem! I liked how, at first, I didn't actually get what the poem was about, but as you get towards the end and read the last stanza, I finally ...

1st - Congrats for having this on the featured list! Pretty cool for someone who's reasonably new!! 2nd - I like that you praised Alyssa's personality. I know I personally ...