JaneThermopolis

I agree with a lot of what the other reviewers said. Here are some things I really want to point out. 1. The grammar is pretty bad. I have the ...

Thanks SO SO SO much for the great reviews!!! I really appreciate them! Thanks, Jane

Oh and thoughts for a good story title would also be appreciated... :elephant:

I thought this was a very awesome story, makes you think about what life would be like if this and this happened. What if kids ALWAYS ate their vegetables and ...

WARNING: If you have a weak stomach, I suggest that you might not want to read this. However, I really hope you do, even though there's a couple paragraphs that ...

I would mix things up but I tried to make each line of the poem end in the word 'heat.'

Like perdido said, this poem is just kind of mediocre. I do however have some nitpicks to point out, and some things I liked a lot. Who? What? When? Where? ...

I really enjoyed this poem. In fact my favorite lines were the first five: I just want to be friends... What we had, some might say it was special, but ...

Two separate poems I wrote in one of my journals sitting around. Hope you like it. :) The Backyard -It breathes. I feel blades of grass in betweeen my toes, ...

That was very very very hilarious. I have some extremely obsessed Twilight fan friends that would probably act like this if they got within a mile of Rob Pattinson or ...

I also agree with Bobo. I don't like having to scroll to see the whole image. Otherwise though, I thought it was a pretty cool picture. :) Keep on drawing!!!!!!!! ...

I also agree with the others, I personally think that this is a great short poem. The only thing you might want to change is that the second word in ...

It was Taylor Swift's year, so pretty much any of her songs...I like them all.

I really enjoyed this poem. It's has a good ryhme scheme and it almost sounds like it would be a good chorus for a soft rock song. I liked the ...

Pretty good, but I have a few nitpicks. "I may not feeling as you feel for me,this sonnet is beautiful as you are to me." ?????? I may not feeling? ...