JaneThermopolis

Uhhh...I didn't really want religion to come into play in the comments. :/

I agree with a lot of what Lillian said, it's very cute and as a girl who would really adore the type of boy you described in this poem, I ...

WHAT YOU SHOULD KNOW BEFORE YOU READ: This story is rated PG-13 for swearing. I didn't rate it 16+ because they're words you've obviously heard before if you speak English. ...

200 Views! Not bad! :)

I personally love The Hunger Games. I don't want to get into a big debate but I sure think Katniss Everdeen is a better fictional role model than Bella Swan. ...

Thank you all so much!!!! :)

I hate when I work hard on a poem and I only get one review. Could I get another? Please?

I guess all I can really say about this is that sometimes I feel like this, and it really is overpowering. I don't know if any of you have felt ...

I know this looks a little desperate, but I can I have another review?

I like getting my anger out through poetry (and stories of course). I hope you enjoy my linguistic fury! -Jane You're insignificant On the map of the world spread out ...

I'm impressed! Very beautiful poem! It's amazing that it flows so well and is pretty visual. One of my favorite lines is: "Stories that words will never tell, are told ...

Despite the typo that Snoink pointed out, Poem #1 is so much better than Poem #2. I like the use of the italics, the way you had this 'artist' telling ...

I hope this poem will make up for the fact I haven't been on here for awhile. Pretty too the point, so I hope you like it! -Jane In an ...

I know it's been a long tiime, but I believe I will post Chapter 2 soon. :)

I personally love travelling and I can't wait to read more about where you've gone and what you've experienced during these travels. Sounds very, very interesting! Keep it up and ...