JaneThermopolis

Robert Frost is some silly old man? Geesh! - Just kidding. I love how you incorporated Aquainted With The Night in this piece, it's one of my favorite Frost poems! ...

Interesting, creepy story! I'm hoping you'll post the next part soon! Anyways I have a couple nitpicks to pick out, but they're mostly grammatical and/or spelling related ones. The gunshot ...

Both of my parents died on the side of Route 47 in Oklahoma. I watched. I don’t remember it being like the murders in movies. We had parked at a ...

WoooHoo! 200 views! Thanks everyone for continuing to read this story! :)

Hahahaha! Good job! I don't rally feel like critiquing now, by I honestly liked the Renesmee limerick the best. When I read it, I burst out laughing. Good job, -Jane

My first attempt at writing a fantasy novel. I hope you like it! Stellar The universe has never seen a day as unusual as August 3. More than sixteen years ...

Wow, this was definitely a really promising beginning. I can't wait to read the next parts. Moving on, this story really made me sad. I didn't cry, but this was ...

A poem I wrote in my journal a couple weeks ago. I wasn't quite sure to post this or not, since I honestly don't know if it's my best work, ...

I also agree with Bond Girl! What the heck is this poem about. I was reading and there was so many different ideas that it just confused me. So she ...

Hiya Chelsea, a.k.a The Ease Dropper! Welcome to YWS! Good thing you're a born writer, because that's what we do on here! I hope to read some of your work ...

I thought this was a cute story, also it seemed to me very whimsical with all the comets, stars, etc. As BondGirl said the end dialogue doesn't really flow very ...

Wow...that was, what's the word.....hmmmmmmmmm........ Well I'm going to come up with a word for this story. Creepsanesity - definition: Creepy, insanity,and pure madness. That is basically what your

Thanks for all the reviews everyone!!! I'm very happy that this story happens to be FEATURED right now!!! :) My first FEAUTURED story since I joined! Thanks for reading, commenting, ...

I tried to zone out into the cool darkness of my bedroom, but nothing helped keep out the noises I heard downstairs. I tried to cover my face and ears ...

The worst book I've ever read...Inside the Mind of Gideon Rayburn by Sarah Miller. It's about this boy (Gideon) who ends up going to this private boarding school where his ...