JaneThermopolis

Thanks so much!! :D

"Liked" this! Honestly, you summarized it so well. When you're having your period, you just want relief as soon as possible, and you were able describe it so well that ...

I LOVED this, and obviously everyone else loved it just as much too because it is on the front page. Ergo, it's brilliant. You took a novel and easily shrunk ...

Hi GrayLady, You said this was your first story, and I'm actually impressed. I found that you're writing flowed throughout the piece, and that's particularly impressive, especially being 13. However, ...

So overall I thought this poem was definitely meaningful. However, I thought the 'thee's and 'thou's were kind of odd. The rest of poem is written in a more modern ...

Dear Mr. Movie Star, Take this as a compliment when I say that your acting is the ‘hot’ to my ‘chocolate’, the ‘salt’ to my pepper’, and the ‘cheese’ to ...

I can't even open my mouth without shit coming out. My mind is in a constant bout, With conscience, that's true But misleading. Sometimes I start what I shouldn't do. ...

I haven't been on in forever. :(

Curious eyes stared out from behind thick lashes on the TV screen. A perky, blonde girl looked doe-eyed into every American household and asked, “Do you believe in true love? ...

You'll never know how much I really loathe you. I'm a plexiglass window to another side of the world. You look at me for a while, Make it feel like ...

Scarlet letters drifting down barren paths, we are the Lonely. We feast on the delicacies of sitting alone in a crowded room, pairing socks when there's nothing else better to ...

(Haven't been on for awhile. :( I haven't had a lot of time to write lately. Fortunately I wrote this, which I'm adding to my flash fiction collection) The box ...

Bacon sizzles on the skillet. Plates clatter against polished oak. Mama slips her feet into soft moccasins. Johnny hits his fist against the high chair. Someone passes the orange juice. ...

I also agree with the others. This was a very beautiful story that I think most girls and some guys can relate to. LIsa is especially characterized well and I ...

PG-13!!! He stared, overwhelmed, by the figure hidden behind the steamy mirror. His reflection, smothered in a dainty mask, begged for help. Those eyes – they couldn’t be his; they ...